深圳有很多很多好玩的地方，比如說，歡樂谷，那裏是壹個刺激的地方、還有海岸城的反鬥樂園、深圳海洋公園、深圳東部華僑城、青青世界、兒童樂園、大小梅沙……還有很多我不知道的地方，雖然我沒有去過，但是光看名字就覺得非常的有趣，感覺好像自己已經進入了那個好玩的世界壹樣！因為深圳靠著海邊，所以有許多的海灘，那些海灘都各有特色，都很好玩。
深圳還有許多美食和佳肴，有很多我都非常的愛吃，比如說，所有小朋友都愛吃的必勝客、麥當勞、肯德基，還有壹些可以供我們喝早茶，東西又很好吃的地方：金蝶軒、香滿園、還有大家都知道的新桃園，這些地方我都去過，我都很愛吃。特別是金蝶軒，我最愛吃那裏的甜薄餐，裏面是芒果，妳們壹定沒有吃過吧？新桃園的布丁很好吃，裏面有芒果，上面還有壹個櫻桃，裝飾的很漂亮，吃起來也很好吃。香滿園的東西也蠻好吃的，每樣我都很喜歡吃。
深圳的壹些小區也很漂亮，譬如說，鼎太風華，我就住在那裏，那裏面治安很好，空氣也很新鮮，還有很多茂盛的大樹給人們遮陰。裏面還有壹個大平臺，晚上的時候，那裏會放音樂，很多人都會在那裏跳舞。上面有時候還會掛彩燈或者燈籠，晚上的時候漂亮極了。還有遊泳池，遊泳池夏天的時候有很多人會在那裏遊泳，遊泳池有深水池和淺水池，給身高不壹樣的人用的。不過深水池的邊邊很淺，都可以下去的。每個去那裏遊泳的人晚上都會很開心。
但是深圳也有許多美中不足的地方，比如，深圳太多垃圾了，而且深圳的人還不給老人讓座，深圳的汙染很嚴重，總是修路，給人帶來許多的不方便。這些都是屬於美中不足的地方，希望深圳能把這些美中不足的地方改掉，讓美中不足進化成十全十美！
我愛深圳！我永遠愛美麗的深圳！希望以後深圳能繼續發展，發展成更加美麗的城市，給大家帶來許多方便的城市！
I love Shenzhen! My home is in Shenzhen, Shenzhen is a beautiful city!
Shenzhen There are a lot of fun places, for example, Happy Valley, a place where there is a stimulus, as well as the coastal city of Toy park, Ocean Park in Shenzhen, Shenzhen OCT East, Green World, children's playground, size Meisha ...... also there are many I do not know the place, although I have not been there, but just look at the names on that very interesting, I feel like they have entered a world of fun like that! Because Shenzhen relying on the beach, so there are a lot of beaches, those beaches have their own characteristics, very fun.
Shenzhen there are many food and delicacies, there are very many of my favorite, for example, all children love to eat Pizza Hut, McDonald's, KFC, and some can be used for our morning tea, something very good place: Kingdee Villa, fragrant garden, there is a new Taoyuan we all know, these places I have been, I am very favorite. In particular Kingdee Hin, where my favorite sweet thin meal, which is mango, you must not eat, right? New Taoyuan pudding good to eat, there are mango, there are even a cherry, decoration is very beautiful, also very good to eat. Fragrant garden things are pretty good, and every kind I liked to eat.
Some district of Shenzhen is also very nice, say, Dingtaifenghua, I lived there, and that law and order inside the well, the air is fresh, there are many lush shade trees to people. There is also a great platform for the evening, there will be put to music, a lot of people out there dancing. Above, sometimes hanging lanterns or lanterns at night when very beautiful. There are swimming pools, swimming pool in the summer, when there are a lot of people out there swimming pool has a deep pool and wading pool, height is not the same person to use. But deep pool of Collage very shallow, you can go on. People go there to swim each evening will be very happy.
But in Shenzhen there are many fly in the ointment, for example, too much junk in Shenzhen, and Shenzhen seat to the elderly people who do not, pollution is very serious in Shenzhen, always roads, brings a lot of inconvenience. These belong to the fly in the ointment, hope Shenzhen can get rid of these fly in the ointment, let fly in the ointment evolve into perfect!
I love Shenzhen! I will always love beautiful Shenzhen! Shenzhen hope to continue to develop, develop into a more beautiful city, to give us a lot of convenience of the city!