Now I will tell you something about the Republic of Korea.
R.O.K is a country located in the south of the Korean peninsula and Seoul,the capital of R.O.K is my favorite modern breath, fashionable avant-courier city.
Myeong-dong and Cheongdam-dong are two of the business centers in Seoul and countless women from all around the world go there shopping .
Korean foods for example Dolsot Bibimbap, Laver Ssambap, Fried hot rice-cake etc...are very nice!
Not only Seoul, but also are many other places worth of being viewed in R.O.K.
Winter is the most fascinating season in Jeju Island.You could see boundless sea when white snow falls.
Republic of Korea,a charming country with beautiful landscapes.
Just be fond of her!
稍微修改了壹下語氣。
嗨，諸位！
現在我就和大家說說韓國。
韓國是壹個位於朝鮮半島南部的國度。她的首都首爾是我的最愛！那是壹個充滿現代氣息的時尚前衛之都。明洞和清潭洞是首爾的商業中心之壹，每天都有無數來自世界各地的婦女在那兒大肆購物呢。
韓國食品如石鍋拌飯、紫菜包飯、辣炒年糕等等都很好吃啊！
除了首爾，韓國其他壹些地方也值得壹遊。如濟州島的冬季就很迷人，妳可以在大雪紛飛中眺望那無垠的大海。
壹個擁有美麗景色的迷人國度，快去喜歡上韓國吧！