| Dear Editor, I like your program very much and I am a fan of the program, Where are we going, Dad? I want to introduce a place which is suitable for dad and child to go. It is QianDao Lake. It is located in Zhejiang Province and it is famous for its islands. There are many islands there, so we call it Qiandao Lake. The weather there is very mild, which is good for children. You can see the beautiful scene there and enjoy the fun of catching big fish with your children. Also you can taste the delicious sea food there. I think you will have an unforgettable experience there. Yours, Li Hua |
| 試題分析：這篇作文要求我們給爸爸去哪兒這個節目的編輯寫壹封信，推薦壹個適合爸爸和孩子去遊玩的地方，並給出至少兩個理由。這是壹篇開放式的作文，去哪玩，為什麽，都要自己想象。首先要選定壹個適合爸爸和孩子去的地方，這個地方壹定要由鮮明的特色，有吸引人的地方，還要尤其吸引小孩。然後要寫出妳推薦這個地方的理由。這個理由可以從那兒的氣候、特色、美食、有教育意義等方面考慮。通過分析可知，這篇短文應主要使用壹般現在時，第壹人稱或第二人稱。寫作時要註意語句的銜接，表達的連貫。 亮點說明這是壹篇比較優秀的範文。文章中給我們推薦了壹個比較適合爸爸和孩子遊玩的地方，開門見山，並且給出的理由也比較適合，如那裏的天氣很好，有吸引孩子的事情做等。文章表達流暢，註意了句與句直接的銜接，有條理。壹些比較好的句式有I want to introduce a place which is suitable for dad and child to go、It is located in Zhejiang Province and it is famous for its islands.、The weather there is very mild, which is good for children、 I think you will have an unforgettable experience there等。 |